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Pretty good, the background art is beautiful, the chirping and wind sounds were more fitting over adding music whatsoever, and the added bee and leaf plant detail for the ball throw response was nice, along with the trees and grass reaction as well.

My only criticism is that where the second shot of the man throwing the ball (00:16) only the ball was colored except for the man. I would have given this at least a 3 1/2 out of five but since it sounds like you had this idea yesterday and took one day to work on this, I'd give this a 3 out of 5 for posting this as soon as possible. I think taking a little more time to color in the second ball throw scene would have made this a little better.

Edit: I saw your updated response and watched it again, and it is definitely better and more finished than before! Instead of 3 1/2, I'm giving this 5 outta 5! One for motivation for the finishing touch and another for taking in criticism as an opportunity of improvement!

POSTBOY responds:

That's fair honestly. I looked at that shot and was like hmmm "i could clean this up and add colour" but for some reason i felt very lazy and kept it as is and said "oh the roughness fits the intensity of the throw."
I shouldve coloured it

EDIT: I took ur advice and the video is now updated

For a short, the twist was hilarious, good job!

CameronBlake responds:

Thanks!

Nice, did this get graded?

terryibele responds:

Yes.

This seems so much funnier than the original concept, hope this gets daily featured.

Edit: 4th place, nice

Bobert-Rob responds:

My work tends to rank a lot lower these days, I'm just glad it ranked at all. Pretty simple concept, yeah, but it definitely works.

This could make a good Newgrounds PSA. At least in this platform the reporting is more legit than Youtube.

Vista-Sound13 responds:

Really?! I would LOVE to see that! :D

It would also be an honor as well lol!

Thanks for those words! :D

Oh wow, I didn't know you worked on the animation of magical girl friendship squad, despite its poor reception from its audience. You must still feel proud for your efforts to include it in your demo reel. Respect.

jessejayjones responds:

Was such a great project to work on! Really glad I could finally include it in my reel

This was really cool, but I don't get why Capri's hand turned into a crow's foot, and then into a crows head. I think one transformation decision would have been more valid.

Shi-Gu responds:

Hahaha you're right, this short animation was just an excuse to show the metamorphosis skills though. The backgrounds and angel were the last things I made.

If there's going to be more of this series on Newgrounds you should definitely create a playlist for your collection. Just saying.

HorseFolder responds:

Wasn't even aware that was a feature on here. Done.

Oh hey, I think this is your first animated short that got 1st in Daily Features!

joaoppereiraus responds:

Yeah, got surprised >w<

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